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For The Shippers Who Ship Too Much

Title: Youth Author: Valerie Pairing: young!Jason Freese/Ronnie…

For The Shippers Who Ship Too Much

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supernatural [team free will]
Title: Youth
Author: Valerie
Pairing: young!Jason Freese/Ronnie
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. Not true. Not making any money off this.
Notes: Forblue_midget . She prompted me with 'youth' almost a year ago, here it is, finally done. NOW ON TO THE OTHER THOUSANDS OF FICS AND REQUESTS I HAVE BUILT UP. ;_; 


Clumsy kisses hidden beneath overhanging branches, their fingers entangled -- flexing, palms flat. This was that summer, sixteen, and the nauseating exhilaration that accompanies all sudden drops. Ronnie slept on the floor of his room, and they stayed up — no words, but the rhythmic, constant communication of breathing: an inhale, and exhale, i think, and Jason nodded to himself in the dark. They exchanged quick, cracked-eggshell glances over breakfast, ignoring the morning paper and fried eggs. One smiled, quietly, secretly -- Jason's mother reaching for a dish and his father clearing his throat and checking the time -- and it was all right.

This was that summer, the imperfect, the unpolished (the rough patches at their elbows, a rock digging into the small of Ronnie's back, the scrape on Jason's left knee) beginning.
  • I cannot explain exactly what it is about this that makes it so perfect, but I think it's kind of the way it's so quiet and still, because it really captures the mood of summer, like when things seem so slow and lazy?

    Like here they stayed up — no words, but the rhythmic, constant communication of breathing: an inhale, and exhale, i think, and Jason nodded to himself in the dark. and the imperfect, the unpolished (the rough patches at their elbows, a rock digging into the small of Ronnie's back, the scrape on Jason's left knee) beginning. here especially, although just, really, all of it, it's so... oh. NEVER EVER EVER STOP WRITING OKAY, JUST CARRY IT ON FOREVER, YOU MAKE MY HEART KIND OF MELT SLIGHTLY.
    • ahahaha! THIS WHOLE 'YAY SUMMER' thing has been taking over my mind lately, so thanks for enjoying it with me. /LAME.
  • I WAS STARTING TO GET WORRIED ABOUT YOU BECAUSE IT FEELS LIKE YOU HAVEN'T POSTED IN AGES AND YOU COME BACK WITH THIS OMFG okay I'll read it.
    • I love that Jason listens to Ronnie breathing! And the looks they give each other over breakfast while Jason's parents are seemingly oblivious (something about that part said that they knew to me). This was beautiful and perfect and said so much in so few words, thank you hun! xD
  • (no subject) - eatpurelight
  • So poetic and lush :D
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